Very poignant piece with an important message. From short essays grow great novels. You have a true flair for story telling with such details. I enjoyed the piece and wished for more.
Not that misery loves company but felt your pain...not that your writing was melancholy..more like John Irving..black with humor.
I wanted more, wanted to know how your experience with Marge changed your relationships with other women. Keep up the writing, novices like myself enjoy reading such descriptive prose, we learn from your example.
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