I disagree with your theology, but you've expressed yourself beautifully. I'm wishing for a pronoun for the creator other than "he" but English is very difficult in that regard. God should have a unique pronoun so that we can escape from the problems inherent in assigning a sex-specific pronoun to a sexless being. There are ways around this problem, and if you were in seminary you'd have to learn them. You might see if you can reconstruct your sentences to avoid pronouns for God altogether -- not easy, but possible. I'm pretty sure you are male, so maybe you don't appreciate the consequences of calling God "he" all the time as fully as the females on the planet. You've got a typo in the paragraph beginning "The Son arrived." I think you have achieved what you wanted to.
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