Good work. I think we all go through this. I also believe the best way to deal with this pain is to express it through art. I really love the way you ended it. It was very creative. I also like the simplicity of the poem and visual effects. I love the part where you describe blood as the liquid of your soul and how without it, you will be no more.
AMAZING!! Great title too, it is a eye-catcher. I relate to this so much. I always tell people that I am like The Hulk. I appear to be calm, cool, and collective. But when I am angry I become something else. Therefore, I am alone and have made a lot of mistakes. The part I hate the most is that it makes me look like a bad guy, or even worse crazy. But, hey what can you do I am the way I am and I just deal with it. Anyways good work
I've been signed up on this website for about 4 years now and have never used it. My English teacher in college made us sign up. Now I have come back to it, still a newbie. I'm trying to figure out how this website works. I have written over 60 poems and keep a journal and hope to share it with the world someday. This story gives me hope that people actually do pay attention to what you put on here. That if I were to share my writings, that somebody may actually read it.
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