to be honest i found this a little boring, without any real intensity or excitment. Some descriptions were stating the obvious and not leaving anything to the readers imagination. However, i feel that there was some good use of words, but improvements can be made to make this more enjoyable as i believe fairytales should be.
I agree with you..you should never give up hoping for a fairy tale ending but it takes dedication to somebody you find who is a good person, and them to you also.......just think this ends a little aruptly because it states that you have finally found your fairy tale ending in your mid- life but do not say how or why that is, which could be interesting....its like watching a film that ends without the characters known whereabouts or what happened after some sort of conflict.......nice read all the same.
GeminiRach.
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