This story is great. It shows great great story structure and interaction during the stories plot. I love the fact that it shows the changes to his mind while they go on. The conclusion is wonderfully structured and executed. The dialog between the two characters is great given the fact it is written exact as it would sound in real life. All in all this story is great.
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