what a wonderful little poem, all but one line has excellent flow. I loved the sentiment, things to do but just sit back and think about it first. Good job.
What a wonderful poem. I was moved when I read it, a lot of people don't realize the sacrifices that young men and women make when they go to war. I had a lot of friends that served in Viet Nam, a few were lost and the ones that came home were never the same. You did a wonderful job writing this.
What a wonderful poem. It flowed very easily and was fun to read. I know where you are coming from. When its dark you can hear them but can't see them, turn on the light and they disappear. A great job. Keep up the good work.
I liked this quite a bit, reminds me of my past and something that happened. There aren't many poems out there that connect with me but this one did. Good job, keep on writing.
What a wonderful poem. You made the drudgery of housework seem light and fanciful. I feel exactly the same way. I had all of my carpets removed from my house and put down linoleum, that's how bad I hated to vacuum. Good job, keep up the great work.
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