this interactive has become horrible ever since ralph75 has completely hijacked the story!
its no longer a interactive femdom story, now its nothing but his personal loli romance playground!
this why i have unfavorited and stopped following this story i wouldn't refer to it as your story as at this point its ralph75's story and no one else!
there where characters like Rachel that i had created with in this story that had clearly defined personalities, but he went through all the chapters where she was mentend and added chapter to specifically retcon her from being a sadist who loves to torment people, into a complete and total submissive!
like he made it so she is Patrick's slave basically, in fact in all of his spam chapters he has it so anna never lets anything that could even remotely bad happen to him, and if any of the other characters try anything she and him put them in there place!?
this story was supposed to he about Patrick's female relatives dominating him not the other way around!
this is now of my all favorite stories and its a shame that more people don't add to it
hopefully this story starts getting the recognition it deserves
need more chapters its hard to find story's about big smelly monster girls let alone big smelly monster girl femdom and its evan harder to find good ones love the story want to read more of it
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