I feel so bad for Anna. I mean Elsa probably needs to use Anna as a foot toy to let off some stress. This was so descriptive though, the horror Anna experienced and being subjected to the smell and torture of Elsa’s feet. Being trampled and drowned in foot sweat all while being smushed in icy heels. The sections were very well organized and the plot was engaging. I honestly hope you make a sequel to this, maybe with Anna being smushed by Elsa’s butt. If Anna thinks Elsa’s feet smell horrible, being farted on by Elsa must be a thousand times worse. This was definitely one of the best stories I’ve read in a long time. Thank You!
How awful for Anna. This is incredibly well written and well organized, though it seems like you could create a second chapter or story out of this. The conclusion seems leaves a sense of continuation.
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