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Review of The Troll Wife  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Just a few things.

"Not in a mood for pleasantries" should be - "Not in the mood for pleasantries."

"If they want be to be" should be "If they want me to be."

"I don't what will happen" should be "I don't know what will happen."

"No so fast" should be "Not so fast."
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Review of Wishing Well  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was unique and I quite enjoyed it. It made my feel good and sad at the end. You know, the reality that not everyone marries the person they're meant to be with truth. Well written.

Wouldn't change a thing!

Amanda
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