I believe your poem is touching and has great meaning. I'd like to see more work if possible at all. The transitions were smooth and you had fantastic grammar. Keep up the good work.
Great work but it could use some small touches. Word choice was good and the grammar was spot on. I just wish the transitions were a little more smooth. Other than that, I think you did a very great job. Keep up the good work!
The first two stanzas were amazing. As I got further and further into the poem, I was delighted she got away from the abuser because if there is anything I hate most in the world, it is woman abuse. So I like the story but I just dislike the topic. Great work.
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