Great story! I can see Madame Bristol and Arthur at the funeral, and I felt their sadness in the air. I can't wait until the next chapter. One thing that would make this story even better would be better punctuation and capitalization. Other than that, beautiful story! I love it already!
Wow! That's great...honestly! I hope to see more of your poetry. You use a wide vocabulary in this poem, and that makes your piece more interesting and shows your reader that you're an intelligent poet... and that gives them a form of respect for your poem... even if the poem isn't their style. I like it! I gave you 4.5 in ratings, only because dark poems aren't really my style, but it was great!
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