This is a small but tightly written poem that captures universal feelings and experiences. The imagery is apt and the words carefully chosen. However, 'dust drained pictures' sounds unclear to me. I would have prefered the writer of this poem to use 'dust stained pictures.' Well done to the writer.
This is a very good poem. The author has been able to create an interesting look into something that touches us all. He has skillfully developed excellent imagery around a mundane subject, so much so that it makes for a compelling read! The effect this peom has on me is to try to work hard to preserve my dreams!
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