I gotta this, this is some pretty interesting info on horror film genre's. At first, I thought it was just some made up story about saving a few cats from actual monsters. But this is just as good as it lets the readers gain an understanding on horror.
I like the realistic approach as to how our planet would react if they were to meet with life beyond our planet as well as our supposed creators. As hard as it is to admit, if we were to have this scenario in real life, it would definitely be shoot first, ask questions later. Not bad.
Wow...this poem really says something about society as a whole when you are growing up. How all are just made to obey the system and never go against it like some emotionless machine. It even covers the points when a person breaks down. Some very emotional stuff here.
I have to say, this is some piece of work you have here. A sort of screenplay type format with hopes that this work will become a feature film or play...it would be amazing if something from this site ever got adapted. I enjoyed all of the drama and comedy from this.
This is a pretty fun little interactive you have. I like the idea of tiny little spies getting into all of those places a normal sized person could never infiltrate and take back all of those secrets back to their base. Hope to see it grow more and more.
I really like this approach you've taken here. I do enjoy anything from the Sengoku period so I could really enjoy reading this. I also like the approach you did with going with a female lead since most samurai during that era normally picked male heirs. I will enjoy reading the other chapters.
I really did enjoy this one, only cause I really like groundhogs and groundhogs day is one of my most favorite of holidays. Plus I always wondered how he would feel every groundhog day where he's forcibly dragged out of his hole just to be displayed to the masses.
The struggles of how one with beauty and one with a handsome physique must struggle against this large and vast world in order for them to try and achieve their dreams of living a very comfortable life. But as long as they have one another, things will always work out.
This is a very emotional piece of work here as it laments to those who have lost their lives to foolish battles and wars as well as those who were lost to accidents that may not have been intentionally caused by others or by the forces of nature itself.
It is from reading this short little poem that one can really understand the calamity that comes about within and outside of the mind that causes a number of problems for people. Especially when the problems tend to cause more harm than good for others.
This poem really seems to speak out to me as someone who has repeatedly failed at most things time and time again, but it is with the power to continue even after falling time and time again. Because it is with the power of continuous tries that one can achieve their goals.
Its amazing how nature can be a connecting factor between a couple who likes to take their love of the environment to a whole nother level. Always risking their lives in order to make others listen to how the world can be improved as well as saved from man.
When I read this poem, I can tell how much athletes can risk their own bodies and spend all of their free time in order to make sure others can enjoy seeing them perform at their peak in order to enjoy seeing their respective teams reach their topmost points.
Another powerful continuation into the series that is the fingers of betrayal. But now things are getting much more darker it seems as it has not lead to murder as well as hiding the body to avoid anyone discovering it. All in order to keep some huge secret.
Wow...this chapter seems to be of very powerful importance of loyalty and how to keep your own priorities straight, especially at the end when Liam left Ron to his own devices when he decided enough was enough and needed to get out as fast as he could.
Wow...it really puts in prespective as to how ones lust for power can end up costing them so much importance in their lives. There are never any actions that can go consequence free. As there will always be an important price to pay in order to gain something great.
I never would have imagined that this is how lighthouses were to be founded all across the world on every shore, allowing sailors to find their way to shore nice and safe. They have existed all around the world in order to make the sea a little less dangerous at night.
I found this short story of yours to be very chilling right down to the bone, leaving me on the edge of my seat with every word that I read. Betrayal, heartache, pain, this story had all of these things and more. All I can say is wow, just...just wow.
I think of this as a wonderful little science fiction story with a small amount of mystery thrown in to make it seem all the more enjoyable to ready. And the end part of the story, it leaves you with a sense of wondering if the two were really true partners or not.
I found this to be a very enlightening story and probably one of the only one I've ever read that involves a moose that is always on the lookout. I especially liked the part where his skills as a lookout ended up saving the live of a small little girl.
I'm not much of an expert into religion or religious figures but, I can tell from the way this story was written that it fully expresses the faith of this search for ones own right to believe. While it doesn't fully reject the teachings of god and Christ, it still does its job of expressing the search.
I always find the Five Nights at Freddy's series to be somewhat of a quick fan favorite series and creating a series that seems to allow others to play as the animatronics themselves and explore situations that would normally be impossible in their original series.
I find this to be a very informative piece of information. I am a bit of a writer myself and always find the action sequences I write to be very lack luster. I hope I will be able to utilize this little guide in my future writing so I can get more action out of my stories and characters.
I really have enjoyed adding to the Daven's Port storylines and find a lot of them interesting, but am mostly entranced by the supernatural parts such as alternate universes, magic genies and other sci-fi and fantasy stuff like that. Hope this one continues to get some love.
While this story seems to be moving rather slowly and doesn't have that much steam behind it to back it up, I really do hope for nothing but the best for this interactive and hope more stories branch from it soon. Just one thing though, while you have uptown, downtown and business districts, what would be your opinion on places like a midtown part, maybe even the shore or even an educational district. Just my opinion.
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