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Review by Tarnishedice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (1.0)
no real story in any of the branching paths, just more useless options, making more options just makes it more confusing.
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
seems like whom ever wrote this needs to go back to writing class.
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Review by Tarnishedice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
This is terrible, there is no structure to it and super short
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Rated: ASR | (1.0)
Too short, really bad punctuation, needs to be deleted or redone to be better.
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