I was immediately drawn into your poem and reminded of the many songs devoted to the topic of "Daddy's Girl'. Your words convey the deep love you had for your Dad and not only sadness at his loss but also some remorse for nto having said to him all that you could have. The repitition of words and lines is very effective. What could enhance this even further would be more uniformity in the structure and length of the verses. Keep writing. You have a lovely soul.
Your poem is really well crafted and shows insight into the 'darker' side of America. It has a sardonic twist to it which draws the reader in. My personal preference would be not to use expletives like 's***' and 'piss'; they seem to degrade the poem but that may be a personal thing. I always ask, Do I lose anything by omitting? If no, then delete or substitute.
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