I'm not much of a poetry person , but this is a wonderful companion to The Legend of Sleepy Hollow. Hauntingly spooky, a warning and an answer for all who bear the name Crane in Sleepy Hollow. To be honest, what I really got from this was " Don't get caught outside after dark, or something that goes bump in the night will get you!" . Good read.
This is a wonderful little story. I really like that you decided to have multiple story paths to Aaron. Personally I like the evil path. My only critism is that there is no choice to begin as a female. I would love a path like that so I could add my favorite bodyswap trope, FtF race changes! Anyway until then keep up the good work .
This item has so much potential, even though I had to suspend my disbelief a little harder on the first chapter. I mean how could someone forget a monk telling you that you have Powers. I mean I would have to try it out right then if that happened to me ! I kid though. This is a fun interactive. Keep up the good work .
Such a deliciously evil Mother in this story! She really has no reservations on what she does to her half wit son. Turning him into an animal, turning him into her husband, or turning him into her. Molly is a truly powerful witch, and I really enjoy watching what she does next! Maybe she could do something to her daughter's once in a while though... Or maybe turning herself into her son's girlfriend would be nice too. I hope to add to this myself when I get time, but until then keep up the good work.
This is a wonderful little bodyswap interactive. I really enjoy it. My favorite arcs are the ones that include FtF bodyswaps. Especially the ones that involve Mom, although it seems no one wants to explore her swapping into her daughter's body or vice versa. Some of the writing in a few arcs are a little shaky , the ones with Katie come to mind, but it is still an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work !
I absolutely love this concept. I love it so much that I can forgive it not having the option to start as a female. I hope to add a few chapters and remedying that by switching the point of view. It has so much potential for my favorite type of swap, FtF race change bodyswaps. Until then keep up the good work.
This item is basically one long story with few branches and I like that. It shows that the writer had a vision in mind and was willing to see it through. I really enjoyed the situations that the main character got in trying to live with his new power/curse. My only question is why the main character never transformed into another characters wife or girlfriend? Is there no one in this world you created that actually was with his dream girl? Or a celebrity ? Just a little constructive criticism. I do enjoy this item and hope to add to it in the future. Until then keep up the good work.
This item has so much potential that I can't believe more people haven't added. I have added a few chapters myself, but will be first to admit it wasn't my best work. I love FtF race and bodyswaps , and animal transformation so when I saw the chance here I jumped on it. Hopefully I will get time to add more in the future, and maybe others will too. Until then keep up the good work .
This is by far my favorite alien possession item on writing.com. The number of chapters I added myself should be evidence of that. It has so many different directions to go. I hope to add more soon and also hope others do too. Until then keep up the good work.
I can't put into words how excited I was when I first discovered this item. The way the writers used the fantastic plot device of Dust in grounded real world settings is remarkable. I wish I had a favorite arc to point out , but I like them all. I can see how the main character in each scenario would use the drug. Its a shame more people haven't added to it. I hope to add a few chapters myself in the future. Until then keep up the good work.
I feel this is one of the most undervalued bodyswap/possession stories on writing.com. It could be so much more and has an excellent premise. What if when the virus steals a body the person who had their body stolen could pick and steal any body it wanted... For example if it stops my body I would in turn become a different strain of that program and could move myself to be in position to take Kate Middleton's body as my own the next time she used a cell phone or computer. I hope to add some chapters myself when I get time. Until then keep up the good work.
Thank you for the GP. It was unexpected and your lottery only inspired me to get around to writing reviews that I had been putting off. It's a good way to get people off their butts and motivated!
I remember when I first found this item. I loved it. When Dana received the same power I really became interested. I loved the FtF possession storyline because I related more to it. Oh what I would do with that power! I hope to contribute when I get time, and until then keep up the good work.
This is one of my all-time favorite items on writing.com. I love the fact that the swap is a one time swap and the main character has to deal with the consequences of it. My only critism is that I wish the main character was female. It would be awesome to see one of the daughters swap with the mother and have to be married to her own father. Or Jennifer swap with Chastity and have to go build a new life in Australia. Or maybe even some FtF race changes . The exchange student could be from Africa or Asian. That would be exciting to me. I hope to add to this when I get time, but keep up the good work in the meantime. I enjoy your writing.
I don't remember exactly when I discovered this item but I do know that I immediately fan'd it. My biggest critism is that it doesn't have a female storyline. TG just isn't my thing. I hope to add to it and remedy that. Maybe have one of Alex's sisters or his Mother find the orb instead. She works so hard as his mom and deserves to use it much more than he does. Maybe she could become younger, or a different ethnicity. The possibilities are endless.
It's unbelievable how an item based on such a popular captioning premise could have so few substantial chapters to it. I am guilty of not adding myself and hope to remedy that soon. I added the celebrity branch in hopes of inspiring more, but it didn't seem to take root. You would figure that more people would thing about pleasuring themselves to famous people than anyone else. Go figure. I like the story and keep up the good work.
I really enjoy this item. So many highjinks that can be arranged with that little blowpipe. I hope to contribute when I get time, maybe create a section where the mother Andrea gets the blowpipe. She works so hard as a mom , deserves to use it to be young, be successful, be single, or a different ethnicity much more than her spoiled brat children.
Such a wonderful plot device. I truly appreciate all of the different directions this story can go...even the way out there stuff like centaurs. My favorite arc is the one where Clara turns into a Kate and runs off with the stallion eventually giving birth to his foot. I hope she decides to go back to her made form . The family that runs the dress shop is also one of my favorites , and would love to see them make an outfit for Kate Middleton.
This is one of my favorite items at writin.com. I don't remember when I first found it but it was years ago. It was one of the first that I found that had a large section involving FtF swaps. TG arcs are okay but FtF get me. I really like the arcs where Victoria experiences a race change and hope to see more. Keep up the good work.
I truly love this story. My favorite arc is the obsessed Veronica story. I love how immoral she is. The Claire story line is great too. Little sister is so delicious as a nymph. I even added the Tracy swapping body's with Rebecca some time ago, and hope to add more when I get time.
What a wonderful website. I especially enjoy the celebrity section. It bodysuits.com were real that is where I would go. I would get a Kate Middleton suit. It would be perfect. I would get the body I always wanted without having to live her life as a princess.
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