I enjoyed your story. It was well written and I enjoyed how you handled the change of topics. All in all, it was nice to read something that didn't have to have sex to try to attract a reader.
This was enjoyable and easy to read while explaining the feelings when someone loses a partner so others can feel the clouded thoughts and emotions. I really enjoyed it.
Your story is well written and easy to read. The topic should draw others as it fits the topics and trends of today which have escalated. With some further information it is interesting enough (to me) to submit for a movie script for transgender people. I could be wrong but I found it to be very interesting for anyone wanting to see how some transgender people feel and a very small example of some harassment they face sometimes on a daily basis.
I felt it is a good story overall for some who may be interested or wondering about some of the issues you present.
What people feel is between them and God, or family, or such, as long as they do not try to force it upon others, which is appearing to happen in society now.
I enjoyed your story.
The way society has changed role reversal stories are common.
This was well written from my novice point of view and easy to read and wasn't tiresome.
I am curious to see how this story plays out.
Well written, easy to read, interesting and a good modern topic.
One thing I enjoyed was that this story wasn't filled with sex like most others.
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