if these are just thoughts then I am not completely convinced as thoughts are more random. Thoughts don't say I have lost all the reasons I had to live... they question..why and how? analyze, and then maybe reach a conclusion. I liked the beginning as it listed all the things which you think you have lost in life...The question in between and the ending message also make perfect sense, but I was just left wanting for more..wanted to know how was your loss more personal and different than the loss of someone else. :)
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