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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
this must be the first time you write because it is the strict minimum for a chapter, this is largely insufficient we can't even talk about a "chapter"


it is good to declare yourself a "fan" but it requires effort than actually


I suggest you read a lot

improve and expand your vocabulary, grammar, punctuation
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
next chapter, Aichi is forced into a trance by the cards unto the world of Planet Cray. :D

welcome back and thanks you for the chapter. ^^

Merry Christmas!
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