wow!!!this is really beautiful!!!i can hear the love...i listened and i heard!!!!great stuff!!!i loved the flow and the way you wrote this...the last line really hit it in for me...it felt really wonderful reading this poem...and i loved every line!!!great job!!!i am amazed!!!this is really just great...great title and great poem...this is really really really beautiful!!!!great job!!!just beautiful!!!
I see it!!!!WOW!!!Surtely nothing could be more beautiful!!!i feel you!!!this is really cool!!!!i loved the poem!!!great stuff!!!!this was so beautiful!!!!great job!!!it isn't perfect but it rocks!!!!great job!!!!keep it up!!!
wow...this is one powerful piece....i really loved the rhyming..and as a great friend of mine would say...the best poems are rhymes...great job!!!this is absolutely beautiful!!!!!i loved every single line!!!wish i wrote this 'cos it's just a masterpiece!!!!great job!!!!
okay..i'm kindda new here and this is my first review...i read your work and i liked it!!!!it had a kindda twist to it...i love the way you express the uncertainty about the one you love...most of the time it is the major problem in relationships...this is quite nice!!!great job!!!
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