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Review of I Am Not a Hero  Open in new Window.
Review by Austin Dawursk Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
A great story and good twist on plot structure but you have some basic grammar and spelling mistakes you need to fix, and you tell more, you need to show it, put more detail into. It's a great short story, and could easily become a novel. But it still needs work but it will get there.
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