Becky, this is a great word. I enjoyed the simple (although slightly inconsistant) form. The poem emits a fragrance of both humility and assurance.
Your poem tells us to understanding lonliness as an invitation to relationship with God and others. It both encourages and exhorts. As a reader I can feel that you have already passed tests of love and have a level of experiential authority to convey this message.
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