I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love the way that you expressed your faith and your feelings through beautiful imagery and poetry. When I read through it, I didn't see any obvious mistakes. I like how you spoke of salvation in your poem. All, in all, this is an amazing poem and you should definitely not stop writing.
I love this poem! Reading over it, I didn't see any obvious grammar problems or misspellings. It is very touching, and heartfelt. I really like the how you expressed your grief in a way we could all understand, and sympathize with.
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