I agree 100%. I had a lot of the same problems. I drank, and was hooked on pain pills for awhile. I understand that they're physical dependencies that form, but you cannot simply choose to not have cancer anymore. You can choose not to drink though. With a lot of support I decided to stop taking pills and stop drinking. It wasn't that simple but that is how it works. The withdraws were horrible and I still suffer some later side effects from the abuse (memory problems, depression) but I am healthy and clean. I think you really nailed what you were going for in a well written article. Good job, keep writing!
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This was a really good story. Well, beginning of a story. It was straight forward and direct. I liked that. You introduced the character who presents himself and give off his personality right off the bat. He seems to be a strong, direct character whose not afraid to ruffle some feathers in order to get things done. I really enjoyed this. Good job, keep writing.
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Really enjoyed this. It was awesome. It makes me think of so many different things. People whose jobs and uniforms become their lives. But sometimes you just want to see the real them, without the uniform and mask. Good job, keep writing.'
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Such a wonderful story. I really enjoyed this and the statement that was made. It seems insane how we can fight over such small differences among ourselves. When put into a perspective such as this, it all makes sense. This was a great story. Good job, keep writing.
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Poem reminds me of how abstract our thoughts can become when we think we are in love. The things we do can be amusing. This was a great poem, good job, keep writing!
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War is such a cruel thing sometimes. We always think of past wars and never realize that ones being waged today are being fought for the same reasons as they have been to years and years past. This was a great poem, really made me think. Good job, keep writing
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I liked this a lot. I have ancestry from Ireland so I'm a little familiar with the Celtic stories and such. This was really cool. Well written and nice. Good job, keep writing.
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This was pretty awesome. I like this a lot. I think it was really well written and had good imagery. Sometimes I feel the same way. I hope that when I'm gone, even though I can't be here physically, people still remember me. Keep on writing!
This was really good, I enjoyed the poem a lot. I think it was really well written and interesting. I wish it could have been a little longer. What caught me was the description, since I'm an insomniac lol. Good job!
I liked this a lot. You're a really talented writer with a lot of potential to write some amazing stuff. I would have liked to seen you go a little more in depth with the story, but thats about it on critique.
I can't say enough about how good this story is. I really enjoyed it. It was well written and clever. Gave just enough away so that we understand whats going on but not enough to keep it mysterious. Good Job! Keep on writing!
This was good. I'm a fan of reading anything mythical like that so I really enjoyed this.
I wish I could have known the main character a little more, but we met her in the midst of all this terror going on so there isn't much time to slow down and give her a back story.
Please continue writing and let us know how this story plays out. Why was the dragon there? Where did it come from? There are a ton of questions I have and I just want to keep reading!
I really liked the ending too. Always nice to end on a positive note. Keep on writing! Good job!
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