I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.it flowed extremely well, with an enjoyable regular pace.The rhyming appeared natural and did not seem forced which unfortunately is quite common in poems of this form.
i love the way you draw the reader in, teasing the reader and forcing the reader through curiousity to hurriedly reach the end of the poem to discover what "the thing" is. Wonderful!! Love is indeed all of things.It is worth the pain that it can cause because in the end love conquers all.
Allow me to make a personal viewpoint..
In line 9 "It makes us laugh, it makes us cry". I think it would flow even better if you were to say "It makes us all laugh, it makes us all cry. ".
I just felt that adding the word all improves the flow and meter slightly. But that is just my opinion.
I enjoyed your style of writing and look forward to reading more of your work.
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