I like this its very personal I've been there before it brings back memorys. But we never know what will happen we can only go with the flow and as you take the journy you learn things about your self
This is a very sweet poem filled with love I felt all the emotions as if it was me
now you said it was for ur bf but u haven't givin it to him cuz ur not sure he would like well this is just my opinion if he loves you as much as do him he will love it
This is true not tomsny people care about they do to the earth or the creatures on it those people are selfish and will pay for what they done I love this poem and respect you for writing it. thanks for sharing
aaaaawwwww so sweet and full of love and so vivid I almost feel like i went on the journy to I do love this poem please keep sharing. Also I feel its contest worthy in my eys
Ok this is just my opion so dont take it personaly its just to help It sounds good but a bit childish or highschool and you might want to reread and check you're spelling I seen a few mistakes it is a good story but it needs a little work
I like this poem heres a thought or you might have forgot in the last line " What is it that makes me remember" I think there should be a you at the end just a sagestion But other than that its a great poem
This is very touching I felt all the pain as I read it and know how it feels I enjoyed reading it cant wait to read more.
one quick thing if you dont mind did you mean to "me" in this sentance "Was the day you made realize"
All in all I loved the poem.
I like this its very true some like to think they have power of there own destiny but our paths are already chosen and you remind us of that thank you cant wait to read more
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