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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautifully written master piece!
The emotions puring out of each verse was honest, touching and heartfelt and only keeps getting better as the poem goes on.
My favorite line was
"My best now never good enough, you can't get over little stuff"
Because that verse alone speaks volume of such personal tragedies we experience through out our lives as we move on.
Guess that's how life is

Thanks for writing and sharing this :)
My rating is purely based on how much I enjoyed reading this.
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
"As long we live, people's dream and their desire to be free will never die"
My initial thoughts after reading your poem.
Wonderful work you have published here and i couldn't be more happier knowing i got the opportunity to read it and was able to relate to it in my own ways.
My rating is purely based on how much i enjoyed reading it :)
Thank you for writing and sharing your work :)
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Review of Matches  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
"You maybe gone,but in my heart you remain rent free" my initial thoughts after reading your writing.
Thanks for writing and sharing this :)
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Review of Broken  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
"Time heals all wounds"
My initial thoughts right after reading your heartfelt poem :)
Thanks for writing and sharing
Have a good day
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I don't really know much about the writing format, my rating is based only on how much I enjoyed reading your poem.
Always a pleasure to read a heartfelt poetry :)
Thanks for the good read
Have a good day :)
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
"Let me shout out loud for once
So I may find a moment of peace"
My initial thoughts after reading your poem
Well done, keep up the good work
Have a good day :)
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Review of A FRIEND  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
"We all have that one friend whom we love and admire deeply because they inspire to bring out the best within us"

Sandra should be gald to have a friend like you who look upto her so much:)

I loved reading this because of it's heart felt sincerity
Wishing you two besties best of luck!
Have a good day :)
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Review of Come With Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderful poetry presentation about love, life and hope.
So glad I found this on my 'Read And Review' feed :)
Thank you for sharing this
Have a good day
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I remember the first time when I heard the news, it was terrible!
Your poetry is exactly the words I had in mind;it's time for the neighbor countries to help out and help those in need..
Hope you're doing fine too...
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! Its been a while since I have enjoyed poetry like this... Thanks for the good read sir!
Bless you!
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Review of CATHERINE  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Catherine,what a beautiful name :)
Your love for her is described so well and in every line.
Wish you both all the best!
I loved reading this.
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Review of Lisa  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved it
Hopefully 'she' remains the way she is :)
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Review of Indifference  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like it, honest and straight to the point.
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Review of HAPPINESS  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening Naomi

I have been trying to return the favour to you since the day you reviewed my poetry but that seems kind of hard given how my work routine is.

I chose 'Happiness'to review because it got me curious.

I don't look into anyone's writing style and focus on the writing itself and how I am able to relate to it. So that rating is purely based on that alone, how much I enjoyed reading it :)

Overall, the message is quite clear and I agree with you. Happiness starts with you :) and that's how you are able to find happiness from those around you.
Normally, I am a person who likes to plan things ahead and don't really like it when things goes against it but when that happens, I say to myself
"No worries mate, time to improvise and see how it goes". Somehow, doing this helps me to get through that.

"ALONE but not LONELY"
This line really caught me off guard.
You know? There was a time when I used to say
"I am lonely but I am never alone"
I was in a pretty dark place back then...

"Life is full of adventure anf meaning"
This is the only line that needs correction, seems like it missed that.


Definitely coming back to read more of your work.
Happy writings
Bless you :) :)
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Review of Haunting Memories  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good Evening,
I am reviewing "Haunting Memories" because it appeared into my Read & Review feed.

My rating is purely based on how much I enjoyed your poetry, since I really don't bother about the style.

This is a well written Poem with indeed, great sadness into it..

When I was reading this, I was reminded of a childhood friend of mine who passed away with a similar incident. He was so full of energy, life and so many dreams. He used to tell me about the things he wished to do when he grew up.
And one day, out of nowhere, I was given the haunting news of his sudden departure...
Though he maybe gone, I believe he's in a better place now.


Thank you for sharing this.
You never know what you write could have such a big impact to that one reader who just randomly happens read it. That is the true art of poetry..

Though we may lose some, there are those who remains for us and we have to be better for them.

Thank you again :)
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Review of Military Service  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Evening,
I am reviewing 'Military Service' because it appeared into my Read & Review feed.

When I was about 14/15 years old, my father would take me to fishing trips and would tell me about the stories my grandfather had passed on him.

My father worked in the military for 13 years (I would never understand how he was able to do that for that long).
Anyway, the stories he told me was very exciting for me and inspired me to join the army as well.
Although it turned out somewhat the exact opposite for me,I still remember his stories.
Seems like their time in the military was totally different from the time I joined around.

But one thing you are absolutely right is that it really is a family tradition to join military in the war time:)

Thank you for sharing this.
Have a good day :)
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Review of A WISE MIND  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good Evening
I am reviewing "A WISE MIND" because it appeared in my Read & Review feed.

I like how you showed that a wise mind can be at first,like the best or something and then goes on to tell that it's aware that it can be wrong too or is open to other thoughts / ideas.
This is how i mostly live my life.
Sometimes I come up with great ideas but I don't follow it unless I have discussed it with my wife/ friends.

I am no expert in writing format and chosed to go with free verses long time ago. So my ratings is purely based on how much I enjoyed reading your poetry.

Thanks for the great read :)
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Review of Rocky  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jacky
I am reviewing 'Rocky' because it was in my 'Read And Review' feed.
Please remember that I give my ratings based on how much I love reading poetry, and don't not based on other things such as rhyme or styles.

I loved how plainly this is written and easily went through it without any distractions. Liked the ending too :)
Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Wordsmitty, I am reviewing
Mary had a bunch of littles
Because it was in my 'Read and Review' feed.
I loved reading it from the first line to the last, its a very decent and innocent, a perfect one for me to show my 8 year old son.
Thank you for the great read :)
Also thank you for the link, I have been needing something like that for a while now.
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Review of Trapped  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like dark theme you applied in this poem and it's all true at the same time.
We could never move on unless we embrace the darkness within
Wisdom is the key to move on

I am just speaking my mind here

I love it :)
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
And it's all brilliant!

I have not read a poem written this creatively about time/clock.
Turly enjoyed it
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Review of Invisibles  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Keep writing!
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Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
This remind me when i went back to my home land in 2015
I by passed my friends homes, even my grand father's home and didn't even knew it!
All had changed...

One thing i noticed is that almost all the younger kids were a bit... chubby...
Though i really didn't wanted to believe that, less than 12 hours i arrived, after talking a walk around the neighbourhood
I knew i was right all along.

No more football fields or the field we used to play other sports, all gone.

Only made me feel like not wanting to go back, but you know how it goes.
You can never really hate your homeland as long as you remember all the good memories of your golden childhood.

Glad i got to read this.
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Review of La Bella Vita  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
A writing dedicated for our love ones are priceless, because it's true and honest.
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Review of Storm  Open in new Window.
Review by Someone Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Short but worth it
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