The content isn't necessarily bad written, but I have just about no interested in the story itself and consider it very boring.
Now you might ask "Why did he enter this story then?" and welllll, due to being sponsored I have to see this item multiple times in lists were I searched for something entirely different.
But well, I don't think the story is not written poorly but essentially boring.
This is a wonderful item with very much freedom given by the creator and many adder used this freedom to the fullest creating chapters full of creativity that gets you quite excited. Especially the additions on jason and the swapping with permission I haven't found on any really large items. So thanks to every adder and the creator
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