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Review of Them-2 Chapter 39  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
it was pretty good
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Review of An avrage day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
i kind of liked it but why would you act like you like that he's teasing you
are you doing that to make him fell good.

do you like him?
why would you fell bad cause you didnt call your dad.
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Review of Would you ... ?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
it seem like your dad or mom didnt want to be in your life when you was younger and now that you have grown up and became someone now they want to be in your life
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Review by terdfurgerson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i like the third paragraph
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Review by terdfurgerson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
what are yall doing are yall killing someone or burying someone
i liked it
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Review of Gangsta D's Anger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
i dont really like the line "because i will get off on you"
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Review of I Am  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
i really didnt like it cause all you said
was that you liked guns. what sre noobs
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Review of skin.  Open in new Window.
Review by terdfurgerson Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I really didnt understand this poem
i didnt really llike that you put those 4 word by themselves
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Review of Go Ahead  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like the line "the third second that you have to face.
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