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Review of Lesson Learned  
Review by Axel R. Lennon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is yeah, I have three brothers and that's how all arguments went when we were kids. You get it all out at a young age, you get all your arguements and pettiness out at a young age against your siblings. Other than that the transition was a bit abrupt and I think it sort of works for the story
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Review by Axel R. Lennon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I thought your story was good, it was poetic and felt real. Well real and not real all at the same time. The descriptions are great and it paints a beautifully vivid picture of the setting. The first line being used as the last line works perfectly for the way you did it.
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Review by Axel R. Lennon
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
The last part was really funny, and is so relatable, I can admit to having left things in the fridge thath ad no business being there. This story is short, funny and a good lighthearted read instead of being pruductive today
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