that was amazing i loved it i really liked the topioc alot of people try to write stories like this but most don't know enough but you really captured the idea i loved how you showed it instead of telling it i hope you keep writing since this was really good
i really liked it i liked how you put quite a lot of dialouge in there since people often tell the story and not have ANYBODY speak which isn't that good i hope you continue writing this story it's really fascinating and a topic people often find hard to capture on paper good luck
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