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Review of Epic of the Trees  Open in new Window.
Review by evilroad Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello,

I hope you find this review helpful to you.

First of all, I like your choice of poetry, as a poem such as this perfectly describes the nature that we seem to relentlessly destroy.

Good word choices.

Might want to add some quotations to avoid confusion, though I do not know if this would perturb your choice of poetry altogether.

Keep up the good work!
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Review by evilroad Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello,

I hope you find this review helpful, as I will try to be straightforward.

First of all, add some spacing between the lines. This helps readers read it a little better, as in its current state, it hurts my eyes a little.

Other than that. I am glad you used diversity in your choice of rhyme and rhythm.

Keep up the good work!
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