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Review by McDeath
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like the subject and the story and the way that its told. I especially like the use of words like shit and erection. My only criticism would be some to change some of the more cliche images like the cow and the raccoon to edgier, or at least more imaginative ones. Overall, a very cool short story. If you have a minute, check out my story, also about waking up with a hangover.
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