haha! cute! i def looked at your poem and could see a paralelism between life, and sometimes forgotten people and this patch of grass. it was done in this way very well!
haha...and your parentheical comment at the end added some light to the poem....good job!
i generally hate rhyming poems...not gonna lie-
this one is great.
the repetition in numbers drew me into your poem. the short phrases left me wanting more, and when it wasn't fully given, i was lead to read it over and over.
i cannot think of anything i would edit in it...it's techincally sound, and very well written.
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