Your short story is listed under "March Review Raid" and I am currently participating in this month's Power Review raid.
The backstory with the compare and contrast was very well put up. I can very easily tell that the child looks back at their mother with envy, but also kind of misses her dearly.
The focus you put into this story to make it about nature is very good and fitting for the month ahead.
The whole story also lives up to its fictional category with its simplicity and being straight to the point while not giving too much away.
The story is descriptive and make the point get driven home when it is introduced.
This is a very well put together story. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing this to the world. Write more for the world!
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