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Review of Fly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I like it but I think the words you are using have been done to death.. fly, sky... and the last two lines I think you should thin abpout changing because I think that the poem is good but the ending not so much... good luck and write on! :)..........
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Review of Swallow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like it.. it's a touch strange andfreaky but all in all, it's goiod... good luck and keep up the good work!
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