The first chapter is fantastic. I love how you make him really mysterious at first then you explain more and more about how he's had something traumatic happen to him. I also am a huge fan of his animal instinct. Ok so I'm a little jealous of them ;)
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/emmajason
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.08 seconds at 10:14am on Nov 22, 2024 via server WEBX1.