If this is to convince people to read your books, make sure that all of your grammar is correct. Many of the words were the incorrect form of the correct word. Just a little note. I look forward to embarking on this journey with the Galaxy Guardians(who remind me of the Green Lantern Corps and other universe policing comics) and I am a bit confused as to why 13-year-olds would be the source of this policing. Do the powers fade with time?
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