I applaud your words and thoughts. These are the thoughts that I too have many times. It is up to us to let others know that science isnt the only gift we have but that many things have been learned in times before.
Jeet kune do and Shotokan are two martial arts I have trained in and appreciate the peace of mind and knowledge that they have helped me to achieve. I learned these techniques and ended up breaking my instructors arm in the full contact version of this training.
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I enjoy reading and I am glad to have read your daughters wonderful poem. It is interesting what inspire those who choose to write whether its poems, books, stories, or experiences.
It looks like a good poem to teach those who read poetry.
I like the origionality of reading writings that we ourselfs create personally.
I used to have a folder of quotes that others had and then I had a thought why not just wipe it clean and use my own. I felt like me getting ratings for others writings wasnt right for me.
I have had numerous ratings of my own quotes now and I am glad I chose to change it... But that is just me.
I thank you for posting a poem that you enjoy
John
I lost my father and I can relate only too well to what a loss this is.
I have worked in and on many facilites in Texas that are "Assisted aid facilities for the dementia and alzheimer impared patients" To me these are one and the same. The only difference being is that the parents here dont always remember their children. You are very fortunate it seems.
Your writing shows alot of caring and that you are a giving person. I like both of those qualities
Ahhh yes... I too was at the mercy of the "Weather forcasters" (for many moons) lol. I now reffer to this form of employment for many and I suggest we call them their true name... The weather-guessers. I personally use the rock method to determine the state of our weather. If there is a shadow beside the rock... Its sunny, if the rock is wet... Its rainy, if there is snow on the rock... well there really is a problem with that here in Texas but anyway... its snowing! LOL
These feelings that you have experienced really tells a story!!! I like this poem it shows that with love that two can go places that single people cannot.
I like the way you bring closure to this... It is a nice touch to place this ending on it!!!
Ahh the story in poetry! This is a ride that we all must make. I pray I get on the right train and not the train of the insane...
I have been on the latter and it wasnt a joyride by any means. I have reffered to it in a few poems and they take on a dark side from time to time... This however balances the scales to show the human side that can change from one to another side.
I suggest others read this and look deep into the lines...
John
In the arms of another woman of course. I have seen it from the male side all too often. Its not just a one way street in a relationship. The traffic goes both ways.
Too often we find this out about one we have chosen to be our partner after its too late.
I can readily relate to this poem and as sure as I am typing this to you right now its going on in thousands of circles around us.
Poems of a spiritual nature touch me many times. This one does for a fact. I needed to read this today. I believe Angels come in all forms and I believe this with my heart.
I welcome you to this WDC community and I hope that you meet many kind folk here as I have. Many have helped me get more knowledgeble about writing and grammar and I cant say enough about them.
You have learned English well. However your sentence structures are weak in a few places. I am sure that in time this will become a thing of the past and you will grow into this English language!!!
john
Many people make sigs here and I admire them for that... I for some reason unknown to me cant even make a stick man on the paint program... I may need a different program but I dont think its a program error LOL'
Your friend
John
I have met a most wonderful woman here that was a police officer. This reminded me of some of her writing. Your style is different (of course) but it leads to many of the same conclusions that this poem sends me to.
Maybe you remember her from a while back Remmington. I think it would be wild to ride with the police especially here in Houston. My uncle was a houston Police officer for almost 30 yrs and so I have been told many war stories. Thank you for this post Nikola
I think its antedotes like this one that keep us human beings and dont allow the arrogance to preocupy our thoughts. This to this reader shows that we are all human and capable of making errors in judgement or in actions.
The pink color takes away from this poem in my opinion.
I hope to read more from you in the future my dear fellow author
This very unusual and yet very intriguing poem is well told and written. I can see it took alot of deep thought and concentration to arrive at this kind of poem. It is unique in the subject detailed... In fact its a one of a kind in this readers mind!!!
I am happy to have read this as I tend to enjoy reading and writing poems myself. I always like a glimpse inside another fellow poet's heart to see the emotions that explode on the screen before my very eyes!!!
I thank you for posting this and look forward to my next journey into your wonderous port my friend
Your friend
John
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