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Review by lalo vasquez Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very good
consider changing discussion on fast heart rate. At 200 beats per min. the person would be transporting o2 quiet well. For instance instead in atrial fibrillation that can give you a black out due to insuffecient blood volume reaching brain, ie., decreased ejection fraction.

Aside from above I think you have forward momentum which is what you want right good job.
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