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Review by Orange Mew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Well well well, this story. This story is quite an interesting beast.

It's well written, and is about shrunken girls. I like that. Giant girls and shrunk girls, all very hot. More of this is certainely good. I like what you've done with it. Ai ok 7/10
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Review by Orange Mew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Despite being one of the older ones on the site, I feel it gets overshadowing alot by newer works, like Buttercombe or the Claire saga, but this one still has alot of value.

The idea of the "fat family" is pretty well made, and I like the way it is done in this one especially
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Review by Orange Mew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'll be honest, this is probably the best story on the site. Or at the VERY least, the best WG story on the site.

It's not my personal favourite(that would be "All Day Junk Food" and "Claires Indulgence") but it's probably the most well written, and best put together.

Nearly 2500 chapters, not counting the sequel. Damn impressive.

5 Stars.
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Review by Orange Mew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This story, is an example of a well made, truly excellent WG story.
Well structured chapters, plenty of chub, and a specific path gets so long it ought to be it's own story.

It is one I fully recommend to any fans of chub.

8/10

-BJG
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Review by Orange Mew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This.

This is one the most well written interactive weight gain stories I've ever seen. That Frankie story, so long, so detailed, every chapter an adventure in itself.

The Teen Titans, and ESPECIALLY the Daria story's have great starters.

Hell, even the Hi Hi Puffy Ami Yumi one, despite me hating that franchise, was great.


Just...one problem.

This is, THEE, worst organize story, I have EVER seen.
What kinda s*** system is this? You can't f***ing find anything!
FIX IT!

Other then that, perfect.
Hope you got my message
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Review by Orange Mew Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
There are very few Daria weight gain stories out there.

I thank you for making this. I hope you can revitalize the story.

Try renaming it to "Daria Female Weight Gain" That should work.

Oh, and we have enough chapters as is, cut the male stuff out.
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