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Review by Ellis Bateman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A very engaging story. I like Athenais. I was able to identify with her. Had I met her in The Shop, I would gladly sit down and have a drink with her. The lineage of the story was good. My attention was kept throughout. I'm intrigured by the Millenium Potion and Athenais' father. The story was descriptive and easy to follow. I also liked how each character had different sides to them, making them real and life like. This is a story that I will continue to read and follow.
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