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Review of Our Love  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like it. I'm not a poet, so take my review lightly.

I think that it makes sense, and most of it runs smoothly.

Maybe just deciding , 'I breathe so fresh' or 'A breath so fresh'?

I'm not sure You shower me with gifts fits...

I'm in no means an expert. I love poetry and admire those that can make something beautiful in a small amount of words. Great job.
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