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Review of The One I Loathe  Open in new Window.
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Review by eliz02 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVE THIS!!!!

sophie bennet and trent bennet*Heart*

best ending ever...but what happened to hilary and sam?did they become husband and wife,too??wow.I really love this.Congratulations!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
eek!!! Trent to the rescue!!

great flashbacks.it fits with the scenario.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This chapter is sooooo hilarious!!!

I am an onion,so white and round. I splatter if I'm dropped on the ground..

hahahaha!!XDgood one!!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Awww...poor Sophie. That was really good!!!Gosh, I love Trent.Keep up the good work!

And,oh,by the way,I think there are some missing pieces here....
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Two chapters of your book and I love it already! I mean, I usually love those with a sci-fi genre but I really think this is AMAZING. Just lessen the "!" in the sentences because it seems like the characters are all excited or giddy or something but other than that, great job!
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