Wow! This was a great story. I think that you should write a continuation of it. Perhaps you could add more about Harry Fergenoff and what K Spencer stole from him or maybe even the other authors whose dreams he stole. Are they part of a pact to get revenge? Or maybe you could even write about what K Spencer's ghost has to do to redeem himself. That would be awesome. You just became one of my new favorites!
This is great! It reminds me of a dream that I had about another recently deceased star. I love these stories because we are here to be a positive influence on one another and sometimes God will use someone we admire that we'd never expect when we'd never expect to fulfill our mission in life. I only wish that you had provided the main character's physical description towards the beginning of your story, so that I could "see" them sooner. If you edit this, I'd love to read it again. ;) Write on!
This is great! It had a very unexpected ending. I wouldn't have expected Santa to have a blade! Santa the Avenger! I thought that the boy would see that Santa didn't leave him the Xbox and would attack him. I never thought it would go the other way around. Serves 'im right!
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