Hi! I love this, being a lover of prisms and rainbows and rain and crystals. The descriptions even though alphabetically placed - work in the way that prisms would, reflective and random. It's cool how you took us from the beginning of the rain to the quick changes in weather. Also it being relatable I think you captured Prisms wonderfully and this inspires me to try an Alphabet poem as well!
Wow, I really like this!! It's very vintage the way you write, also the way you rhyme. The part that got me was "But words less fair make me succumb-When dropped from ruby lips sublime." I feel like this really captures when someone says something in a happy tone but is hurtful. This definitely takes you to the 1800's, a romantic vibe to it as well!
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