Very interesting read. You caught me off guard when you stated, 'This is why I'm here'. Nicely done.....you changed the 'feel' of the story and caught my interest again. Nicely done. Woody
Loved the beginning.;....especially the newspaper ad....I mean who would take on that challenge? Held my attention while being trapped within the ice pack. For a short overview I believe that the content was well positioned....chronologically established and very informative. Wonderful to understand what the conditions were back in the early 1900's. No GPS or global phones...I definitely felt the mood of the times. Nicely done.
It used to be that 'stealing' time from your employer was the same as stealing product. We have come to the point where the employee thinks that the employer 'owes' them and will steal whatever is not watched and tied down. Loyalty is becoming a thing of the past...unfortunately. Most good employers do, however, offer rewarding careers which allow the best employee an opportunity to grow and succeed. Always work hard for the man who gives you opportunity. Your future is at stake.
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