Hello: The African American crossword puzzle was very inspirational. After completing the puzzle I have a newly found purpose to write everyday and to complete and publish some of my work. I also like the word prompts and sentence starters.
Very impressive use of words to draw in the reader and get them emotionally involved. Despite the arranged marriage the couple seemed to have the same problems that every body else has, trying to get to know and understand each other. Juilia's character is very perceptive and warm and surprisingly Sammy's character is reasonable and giving despite the fact that he is unhappy about his arranged situation. Great job
Hello:
I love the transformational language in the story. I love how the writer transforms the story to allow the reader to get to know that the character Marli is still a flesh and blood person and then allows the reader to experience transition of the character into a spirit. Excellent example of creating a dynamic character.
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