Awesome! I like the flow of the poem and the way it is set... gives it a good rhythm. :) Plus, with the idea of presenting peace and harmony in a world where only half of those things exists (even barely), it's good that we can spread smiles through a simple act of kindness.
Absolutely beautiful!! I can't believe how heartfelt this is! I appreciate your Love for all, and the story of Matthew Shepard is a tragic, terrible occurence. :< But I believe in equality for all, and this surely proves that you have that characteristic, and it flows brilliantly in your writing. :)
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