Sophie of the moon,
love the surname btw, but first of all i love anything written from experience bc it will always have that REAL feel. you cant fake experience and i feel very close to this writing, definitely can relate in one way or another and im sure alot other will feel the same. Great wording and description. Keep writing! and check out mines if you get a chance. would love to see more from you :)
First and Foremost thanks for sharing, im also a newbie :) but i will say this is my favorite poem that ive read from a newbie on here by far!
I love the stern tone and imagery around it, and the fact that there is real meaning. anybody can put rhyming words together but to make them significant is the hard part and you've captured it! love it! continue writing and check out my poems! ill be keeping an eye on your portfolio.
Strlcuckoo,
First and Foremost thanks for sharing.
Very Good Imagery! Description was not lacking at all here, and very necessary.
Poetry/spoken word is my thing so i love the free feeling of this.
Short and Sweet just how i like them :) I look forward to seeing more or your work.
First and foremost thanks for sharing, I am also a newbie and it definitely takes courage to start sharing your work. I get the tone of your work and what you are trying to get across because it seems to be from a little from experience and i can relate to that. Everyone knows someone who is "so in love" but not really. Not sure i got if there was a message to it or you were just drawing attention to the issue. Either way i enjoyed and look forward to more!
Keep Writing!
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